短文改错 十九

Passage One

Wang Peng enjoys being clever and wishes to do a great job. However, he is firmly fasten to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves everything.

In fact, you can see many such example in life. Just as the old saying goes, diligence leads to success while laziness results from failure. Every task require had work, from learning English to build a house. Some of my classmates are definitely clever, and they had a strong desire to go to a famous university, but unfortunate, they are wasting the time talking or playing. And as a result, they end in failure.

Therefore, in my opinion, diligence plays a very important role in life. Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able overcome difficulties and achieve our goals. No one can succeed just by thinking without any actions. Passage Two

I like watching birds. I choose this hobby years ago because I like birds and enjoy being close to the nature. Bird watching are a good hobby so it isn’t very expensive. As a beginner, all you need is curiosity and a notebook. When you become curious about it, you may want to buy more books about birds and a better telescope. Not special skills are needed, and it helps if I join a bird watching club. They can teach you when and where to watch birds and what to watch them. You will also be taught geography or the weather. If you want to become a bird watcher, I strong suggest you try to find a bird watching club, and they will help you get started. Good luck! Passage Three

One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time, the old man wasn’t breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man’s breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.

Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.